Wednesday, March 17, 2010

play

I went and got my dad's phone I clicked on slingshot cowboy and started slingshoting rocks at the cows I saw a gopher I slingshoted it at the gopher and got a grenade I slingshoted that and there was an explosion. Of cows I got another gopher and got a rocket. I won it was fun and then I started to write on my blog.
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  1. Sarah WaldmanMarch 18, 2010 at 3:57 PM

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  2. Sarah WaldmanMarch 18, 2010 at 4:00 PM

    Denion,
    Just like a journal entry, a blog post needs to be carefully written, revised, and editted. I can tell that you didn't reread this before you clicked "post." There are six missing periods, and one of the two that you included is in the middle of a sentence.

    I expect you to put more time and effort into your homework,
    Ms. Waldman

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  3. AnonymousApril 2, 2010 at 2:17 PM

    Denion,

    It sounds like a fun game. Jaci

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