Wednesday, March 24, 2010
another day
It was a boring day so I asked my dad can we make the paper airplane outside? He said "later now I'm working." So I waited until later and got a paper and the book and went outside. we folded according to the instructions we didn't have trouble with step 6 we still had trouble with 10 that ruined the whole plane. I trimmed some parts and I noticed that it was a different plane and I told my dad.
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Wow Denion!
ReplyDeleteThis is almost the same story as your last entry, but do you see how much stronger this one is? By including dialogue and details you made the moment come to life. Well done.
Ms. Waldman