I was at the Queens zoo and the goats were licking my hand,
they had there feet planted firmly on the land.
I throw some food at a duck,
some berries in my pocket squish! I think I'm out of luck.
I see a puma's hairball,
I am on top of the rock climbing wall I think I might fall!
I had a great time at the zoo,
what's that in my shoe!
Rhyming can be very effective, but only if it helps your poem to make sense. Why did you choose these events at the zoo to write about? What idea about our day at the zoo did you hope to communicate to your reader?
ReplyDeleteRemember your reader,
Ms. Waldman